My newest poem, please review!
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Her veil is the mist covered mountains
her dress the sparkling sea
the bouquet she holds, the meadow
and in this girl is me
The Groom stands in his armor
as brilliant as the sun
for He is the King of glory
the bride is His chosen one
Oh the galaxy is the chapel
the clouds as carriages draw nigh
Angels sing the chorus
and with joy the bride will cry
The King wipes away every tear
a kind smile on His face
“These vows will last forever,
forever you shall have my graceâ€
Mountain Mist
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Mountain Mist
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(> <) Help Him Achieve World Domination...
Lee: "I never want to see the tears of an important person again...So, I will never lose again, Gai sensei!"
To do evil that good may come of it is for bunglers.~William Penn
Hiei: "As much as I hate the humans, I think I loathe the tourists even more.
"Everything you say is TEDIOUS!!!"~Sesshoumaru-sama
Never post faster than your guardian angel can read.
Life is fragile, handle with prayer.
I have a Savior and i'm not afraid to use Him!
(O.o) Copy The Bunny Into Your Sig
(> <) Help Him Achieve World Domination...
Lee: "I never want to see the tears of an important person again...So, I will never lose again, Gai sensei!"
To do evil that good may come of it is for bunglers.~William Penn
Hiei: "As much as I hate the humans, I think I loathe the tourists even more.
"Everything you say is TEDIOUS!!!"~Sesshoumaru-sama
Never post faster than your guardian angel can read.
Life is fragile, handle with prayer.
I have a Savior and i'm not afraid to use Him!
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Rjdreamer - Posts: 87
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Beautiful. I love the imagery. Very good.
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
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It's great, I can't but think about Christ and the Church
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
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