ok so here's a poem a wrote!
tell me what you think!
Angel you're always beside me
When I cry you whipe away my tears
when i'm cold you wrape yourself around me.
you find the pieces to my broken heart.
you protect me from Satin
you catch me when i fall
you watch over me when i sleep
you hold my hand when i'm scared
Angel take me away from this place
I know your beautiful but let me see your face.
Angel (poem i wrote)
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Angel (poem i wrote)
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zelda - Posts: 237
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It okay, There are a coulpe of point where the pome is hard to follow.
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
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Are you referring to a guardian angel type of figure or to JC/God/HolySpirit?
More punctuation in general would be good.
Angel you're always beside me
When I cry you wipe away my tears
when i'm cold you wrap yourself around me.
you find the pieces to my broken heart.
you protect me from Satan
you catch me when i fall
you watch over me when i sleep
you hold my hand when i'm scared
Angel take me away from this place What place? Be more specific.
I know you're beautiful but let me see your face.
More punctuation in general would be good.
Angel you're always beside me
When I cry you wipe away my tears
when i'm cold you wrap yourself around me.
you find the pieces to my broken heart.
you protect me from Satan
you catch me when i fall
you watch over me when i sleep
you hold my hand when i'm scared
Angel take me away from this place What place? Be more specific.
I know you're beautiful but let me see your face.
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
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