Poem

[Erin]

ok so this is an older one of my poems I wrote it a about a month or so ago and I'd just like your guyses opinions on it or whatever...

"Lost Respect"

I'll never understand you
I don't want to try
If I did than I know
I'd just get sucked
Deeper into you lie
You say that you love her
But if she left tomarrow
Would you really care?
You sit there with
That blank pathetic stare
Wondering what
You've done wrong
You need to grow up and
Fix the problems of your own
Your hurting them
And it's killing me
Do you just not care or
Can you really not see??

this poem is dedicated to one of my best friends who's just been pretty screwed up latley

[creed4]

Seen this story a few times, I even wrote a pome simular about someone close. It's hard from any angle. Good Poem though keep it up.

[Erin]

thanx