The Flesh Eater

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The Flesh Eater

Postby Jaltus-bot » Thu Dec 08, 2005 11:25 pm

The Flesh Eater
By now in hunger his fangs jutted out
And he had such a crazed look in each eye
Its sweet juices were now sprayed all about
He was eating it like such poor things die
He didn't care what was fat or what was lean
Its flesh was once muscle that he now ate
He lavishingly licked every bone clean
And only moans of pleasure could he state
Enthralled with this meal he now delighted
The frightful scene would make you want to hide
But consuming it he was excited
As its body's juices dripped down each side
By potatoes he was out of gravy
But oh how delicious is KFC
When I feel blue, I start breathing again.

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Postby Swordguy » Fri Dec 09, 2005 7:52 am

ha ha ha that is fairly good
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Postby CreatureArt » Tue Dec 13, 2005 1:54 am

KFC. Lol. That's fantastic. :grin:
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Postby Icarus » Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:16 pm

Hilarious, milady :grin:
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Postby Bobtheduck » Thu Dec 15, 2005 3:59 pm

Very good... hahaha
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Postby Shogun12 » Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:45 am

That is really good. Is so graphic. I can see it in my mind. i love the KFC part.
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Postby chibiphonebooth » Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:57 am

HA.

thats amazing.

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