A Winter Romance

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A Winter Romance

Postby Silvanis » Sat Oct 01, 2005 8:51 pm

This is only the beginning. Feel free to give constructive critisism... but please don't be to harsh. :sweat:

Winter’s icy breath whipped and wound its way through the trees of the small village in the northern part of Washington. Snow smothered the frozen ground with glittering lethality. Not even the bravest of creatures ventured out into the frigid air. No creature except Yoki.
Yoki was a tough girl of fifteen years. She walked stubbornly against the mocking winds, tossing her short, tangled, auburn hair defiantly, as if to say, “You can’t keep me inside.â€
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Postby christianfriend » Sun Oct 02, 2005 3:19 pm

Kyaa! That was so good Silvy! I cant wait to read more!
[font="Lucida Console"][align=center]“The [color="Magenta"]best[/color] kind of [color="Magenta"]friend[/color] is the kind you can sit on a porch and swing with, never say a word, and then walk away feeling like it was the best conversation you've ever had.â€
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Postby Silvanis » Mon Oct 03, 2005 10:36 am

Yay! Thanks! ^^
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Postby christianfriend » Mon Nov 07, 2005 9:38 pm

Silvanis wrote:Yay! Thanks! ^^



<.< >.>.....Whats gonna happen next?..its killin me! @_@
[font="Lucida Console"][align=center]“The [color="Magenta"]best[/color] kind of [color="Magenta"]friend[/color] is the kind you can sit on a porch and swing with, never say a word, and then walk away feeling like it was the best conversation you've ever had.â€
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Postby starstoryteller » Mon Nov 07, 2005 10:26 pm

Me living in Washington Issaquah this was delightful to think of snow. We only get it like once a year and it never gets so cold that milk frezzes. I love that.
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Postby Silvanis » Tue Nov 08, 2005 3:50 pm

Coolness! :thumb: (lol, literally)
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Postby Silvanis » Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:17 pm

Thanks much Anonymous! I shall work on that in my next installment... if I can find time to do that. XP
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