The only quick note I have is that when Jeille is talking to Airi at one point the nature of what he's saying seemed to me to be a little bit more blatantly sexual than it sounds in your review. Other than that though, very good!
At the behest of an anonymous CAA'er source of trustworthy opinion (unless they wish to reveal themselves), I felt it best to expound on some material found in volume 1 lacking in the current review. Please note these changes.