Broken
Disclaimer: Teen Titans are copyright Warner Brothers Entertainment Inc. All Rights Reserved.
EDIT: Fic is set after the episode Betrayal.
Words could not describe the many emotions that were running through me at that very moment. A mixture of anger, sadness, disappointment, even hate. “So, it was all a game? You were just pretending?â€
Broken *Teen Titans Fanfic*
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Azier the Swordsman - Posts: 3109
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Wow... um I don't really watch Teen Titans and I haven't seen the episode this is based after, but one things for certain. When you read this, you can feel the guy's pain. This is an example of good emotional writing.
I have an idea of who the guy and girl is but, like I said, I haven't watched many episodes of Teen Titans so I'm probably wrong. Anyway, this is really good and now you've done got me interested. Does this fanfic continue?
I have an idea of who the guy and girl is but, like I said, I haven't watched many episodes of Teen Titans so I'm probably wrong. Anyway, this is really good and now you've done got me interested. Does this fanfic continue?
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mastersquirrel - Posts: 696
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*starts to cry*
That episode always makes me sad..all 10 times I have watched it (CN playes it often)
BB IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER!!!
that is a great fan fic, Azier.. I really really really really liked it!! AWESOME Job!
I hope Terra wakes up again... Maybe he will forgive her... he seemed to on ANOTHER epidsode...
*goes off to a corner and cries.*
That episode always makes me sad..all 10 times I have watched it (CN playes it often)
BB IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER!!!
that is a great fan fic, Azier.. I really really really really liked it!! AWESOME Job!
I hope Terra wakes up again... Maybe he will forgive her... he seemed to on ANOTHER epidsode...
*goes off to a corner and cries.*
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Azier the Swordsman - Posts: 3109
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ChristianKitsune - Posts: 5420
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If you have some more things that you think would be good to use to continue this fanfic, by all means you should! You did very well with this first part and if you were to continue it, I believe it would turn out nicely.
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mastersquirrel - Posts: 696
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OH. MY.GOSH. are you sure youre not really beast boy? that was sooooo well done, can you do one for Birthmark (raven's Birthday)for me? (seeing as i missed it grrr) that was great. *blown over onto back*
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(>'.'<) (>'.'^) (^'.'^) (^'.'<) (>'.'<)
DO THE KIRBY!!
adopted or adoptee:
kazekami
IZ&Trigun4life
Starfire1
Nami
Jman
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
(\_/)
(O.o) Copy The Bunny Into Your Sig
(> <) Help Him Achieve World Domination...
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Sakura's Wings - Posts: 49
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I just saw the episode where Terra first arrived. Man, that was really different from the other Teen Titans I've seen. I want to see the one this fanfic is based off of now! *repeatedly checks to see when next TT episode comes on*-
mastersquirrel - Posts: 696
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*passes out from the sheer awesomeness* it works well as a one-shot but continuing it wouldn't hurt either.
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Starfire1 - Posts: 303
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I'm starting to get inspiration again. I believe I may actually make a few more chapters within the next few days. One thing I'm trying to decide is if should I turn it into a pairing fic. (Ending it with him falling in love with again.)
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Azier the Swordsman - Posts: 3109
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The Next Morning
Comes the dawn. I shoot out of bed, drenched in cold sweat; from the nightmares that have been plaguing me the entire night. At first; I wonder if the events from last night were nothing but a dream; a horrible nightmare like the ones I’ve been suffering; maybe if I walk outside right now; walk in the common room, she’ll be there among the others; laughing; having a good time, and it will really have never happened all along. I realize that I’m clutching something, I look down to see the heart shaped box. The one I made for her. It wasn’t a dream! It was all real! She really betrayed us… betrayed me... In a sudden burst of anger, I clutch the box and hurl it across the room. It hits the ground and shatters into several pieces.
I instantly feel a pang of regret. I climb off the bed; walk over and scoop the pieces up into my hands. This was, after all, the only thing I had left of her. I can feel myself starting to break down again as I gather the pieces. I can’t do this… I must stay in control… I can’t cry. It’s futile, and a few stray tears find their way down the side of my face where they strike the pieces in my hands.
Knock! Knock! “Hey, Beastboy, you okay in there?â€
Comes the dawn. I shoot out of bed, drenched in cold sweat; from the nightmares that have been plaguing me the entire night. At first; I wonder if the events from last night were nothing but a dream; a horrible nightmare like the ones I’ve been suffering; maybe if I walk outside right now; walk in the common room, she’ll be there among the others; laughing; having a good time, and it will really have never happened all along. I realize that I’m clutching something, I look down to see the heart shaped box. The one I made for her. It wasn’t a dream! It was all real! She really betrayed us… betrayed me... In a sudden burst of anger, I clutch the box and hurl it across the room. It hits the ground and shatters into several pieces.
I instantly feel a pang of regret. I climb off the bed; walk over and scoop the pieces up into my hands. This was, after all, the only thing I had left of her. I can feel myself starting to break down again as I gather the pieces. I can’t do this… I must stay in control… I can’t cry. It’s futile, and a few stray tears find their way down the side of my face where they strike the pieces in my hands.
Knock! Knock! “Hey, Beastboy, you okay in there?â€
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Azier the Swordsman - Posts: 3109
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That Afternoon
This is the slowest day of my life. Outside, I can hear the rackets of hammers and power tools as the others try to get the tower back to normal. I’m starting to get sick of lying in my room all day. Although I don’t really want to, I feel as if I will go insane if I don’t get out. I decide to take a walk. As I roll off my bed and exit my room, I make sure no one’s around to see me. I don’t feel like having to socialize with anyone else right now. I decide against using the front door, I would surely be seen then and would have to experience unwanted confrontation. I decide to exit via the roof. Unfortunately, as I’m almost to the stairs, I see Raven heading my direction. I groaned inwardly, she was the one I least wanted to run into, but deep inside I knew what I had to do. It was now or never.
She looks straight ahead, as if I don’t even exist. Must still be a ticked off from our last encounter. I stop. “For what it’s worth, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean what I said back there. I’m just not… feeling well today.â€
This is the slowest day of my life. Outside, I can hear the rackets of hammers and power tools as the others try to get the tower back to normal. I’m starting to get sick of lying in my room all day. Although I don’t really want to, I feel as if I will go insane if I don’t get out. I decide to take a walk. As I roll off my bed and exit my room, I make sure no one’s around to see me. I don’t feel like having to socialize with anyone else right now. I decide against using the front door, I would surely be seen then and would have to experience unwanted confrontation. I decide to exit via the roof. Unfortunately, as I’m almost to the stairs, I see Raven heading my direction. I groaned inwardly, she was the one I least wanted to run into, but deep inside I knew what I had to do. It was now or never.
She looks straight ahead, as if I don’t even exist. Must still be a ticked off from our last encounter. I stop. “For what it’s worth, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean what I said back there. I’m just not… feeling well today.â€
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Azier the Swordsman - Posts: 3109
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I know this is a gravedig, but wow...this is great. I'm also a BB fan. 
RESPECT THE UNBORN AND CHOOSE LIFE...your mother did.
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"Do not underestimate the power of the muffin! The muffin will smite all those who question it! The muffin will crush all nay-sayers! He who controls the muffin shall control the entire world!" -Taishi, Comic Party English Dub
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