this is jsut a little something i've beenw orking on...feel free to criticize cause i need it!
Glass is shattered by your hand
Angels wait for your command
Metallic wing
Spread like death
Whispers run through fire red hair
Flowers wilt make way for despair
Legends secrets tales of old
Ancient songs the past unfold
A conqueror
Of massive strength
Truth soul seeker
Stopping at no lengths
Torn by duty
Tortured mind
Evil memories leave behind
Heal the heart
And mend the bone
Beautiful face
Wrapped in stone
Endless life span
Tired and weak
Your future hold
The past will speak
No more wars or battle cries
Fill the oceans, lands or skies
Make a grave
Eternal rest
Hope for weary
Red heart blest
nonsense
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Wow that was AWESOME!!!!!! You are a great poet... i can't write poetry AT ALL
Arîdkha-
A.K.A. Snicket
P.S. I learned all my dance moves from Josh & Jon
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" ...there's a love that could fall down like rain, let forgiveness wash away the pain. And no one knows what they are searching for this world is crying out for so much more..."
A.K.A. Snicket
P.S. I learned all my dance moves from Josh & Jon
xanga- http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=blackKat013
" ...there's a love that could fall down like rain, let forgiveness wash away the pain. And no one knows what they are searching for this world is crying out for so much more..."
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