live or let die

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live or let die

Postby c.t.,girl » Sat Apr 02, 2005 3:23 am

ok...i don't always write stories...and if i start to, i rarely ever finish them...i'm hoping that this is one that i will finish...well...here ya go...btw...yes i realize that the title is a song...and no i did not intend that...and yes...i know i've barely even touched the rim with this...but...it's 3:21AM! i'll think of more tomorrow! ...or rather more later on today...if i'm not busy...^^;

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Live or Let Die

by ~Christin Torres
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Dodging bullets from all sides, he quickly escapes death’s clutches only by finding an opening in the wall. A girl had pulled him in though. She speaks to him but he’s unable to hear her over the sound of bombs exploding and guns going off on all sides. Suddenly a sound of silence allows him only to be able to hear but a few words from her.
“A fight will occur!â€
[color="DarkOrange"]"The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things... hey... the good things don't always soften the bad things; but vice-versa the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant." -11th Doctor

"The advice I like to give young artists, or really anybody who’ll listen to me, is not to wait around for inspiration. Inspiration is for amateurs; the rest of us just show up and get to work. If you wait around for the clouds to part and a bolt of lightning to strike you in the brain, you are not going to make an awful lot of work. All the best ideas come out of the process; they come out of the work itself. Things occur to you. If you’re sitting around trying to dream up a great art idea, you can sit there a long time before anything happens. But if you just get to work, something will occur to you and something else will occur to you and something else that you reject will push you in another direction. Inspiration is absolutely unnecessary and somehow deceptive. You feel like you need this great idea before you can get down to work, and I find that’s almost never the case." - Chuck Close[/color]
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Postby Kawaiikneko » Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:05 am

oh that sounds interesting... I like your dialogue! I'll be watching this one ^o^/
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Postby Esoteric » Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:06 am

Hmm, interesting opener. I'm curious to see where the story is going. Yeah, the title did sound familiar. Actually, I think the song (and the movie) are called "Live and Let Die".
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Postby c.t.,girl » Sat Apr 02, 2005 1:47 pm

hehe yah...^^ and i think i've seen that movie...i think...but i'm not sure...i can't remember...XDDD
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"The advice I like to give young artists, or really anybody who’ll listen to me, is not to wait around for inspiration. Inspiration is for amateurs; the rest of us just show up and get to work. If you wait around for the clouds to part and a bolt of lightning to strike you in the brain, you are not going to make an awful lot of work. All the best ideas come out of the process; they come out of the work itself. Things occur to you. If you’re sitting around trying to dream up a great art idea, you can sit there a long time before anything happens. But if you just get to work, something will occur to you and something else will occur to you and something else that you reject will push you in another direction. Inspiration is absolutely unnecessary and somehow deceptive. You feel like you need this great idea before you can get down to work, and I find that’s almost never the case." - Chuck Close[/color]
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sat Apr 02, 2005 2:08 pm

Cool!^^
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Postby Icarus » Sun Apr 03, 2005 4:22 pm

Not bad. :thumb:
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Sun Apr 03, 2005 7:35 pm

one part, not trying to bash your story. But one part was a little bit cliched

She sighs and says, “If your father were still-“


that part, a lot of stories and movies have that like "if your father was still here" or "if your father was still alive" etc etc
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Postby c.t.,girl » Tue Apr 12, 2005 9:03 am

[quote]He walks out of the California beach house that his dad had left his mom and him about 4 years ago. It was a surfing accident most people say that killed him, but James won’t believe it. He believes it was murder that his dad was shot and thrown off the pier and hit the sand, only to be swept of into sea by the high tide. Although, he couldn’t think of why his father would want to kill himself…but that’s the impression he got. His father was barely ever home.

“I’ll be home late, honey. Some friends an’ I are going to go surfing a bit and catch some shots.â€
[color="DarkOrange"]"The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things... hey... the good things don't always soften the bad things; but vice-versa the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant." -11th Doctor

"The advice I like to give young artists, or really anybody who’ll listen to me, is not to wait around for inspiration. Inspiration is for amateurs; the rest of us just show up and get to work. If you wait around for the clouds to part and a bolt of lightning to strike you in the brain, you are not going to make an awful lot of work. All the best ideas come out of the process; they come out of the work itself. Things occur to you. If you’re sitting around trying to dream up a great art idea, you can sit there a long time before anything happens. But if you just get to work, something will occur to you and something else will occur to you and something else that you reject will push you in another direction. Inspiration is absolutely unnecessary and somehow deceptive. You feel like you need this great idea before you can get down to work, and I find that’s almost never the case." - Chuck Close[/color]
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Postby c.t.,girl » Tue Apr 12, 2005 9:05 am

Mr. SmartyPants wrote:that part, a lot of stories and movies have that like "if your father was still here" or "if your father was still alive" etc etc

yes...i know...but...i couldn't help but put it...^^;
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"The advice I like to give young artists, or really anybody who’ll listen to me, is not to wait around for inspiration. Inspiration is for amateurs; the rest of us just show up and get to work. If you wait around for the clouds to part and a bolt of lightning to strike you in the brain, you are not going to make an awful lot of work. All the best ideas come out of the process; they come out of the work itself. Things occur to you. If you’re sitting around trying to dream up a great art idea, you can sit there a long time before anything happens. But if you just get to work, something will occur to you and something else will occur to you and something else that you reject will push you in another direction. Inspiration is absolutely unnecessary and somehow deceptive. You feel like you need this great idea before you can get down to work, and I find that’s almost never the case." - Chuck Close[/color]
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Postby Kawaiikneko » Tue Apr 12, 2005 2:22 pm

ohh the thing with the cops has me intrigued now! *o* This is very interesting
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