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Postby girlninja » Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:35 pm

Interesting is it not
how in the midst of everything
that we question so much
that we always have to ask
and instead never believe

How even though he showed us
we want more
even though he freed us
we are never satisfied
is this the greatnes of humanity?

We are so weak
yet we claim strength
and instead we wallow in filth
and don't turn to the one who cleans
our many sins away.

Who are we?
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous

and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede

ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

:jump: :lol: :thumb:

"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

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Postby Yeshua-Knight » Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:38 pm

very true, and very well worded
'nuff said
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Postby girlninja » Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:58 pm

*smile ^_^ thankyou ^_^
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous

and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede

ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

:jump: :lol: :thumb:

"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^

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Postby Photosoph » Fri Apr 08, 2005 11:25 pm

I love your two poems! They remind me of when I'm in that quiet, thoughtful, reflective (like your other poem which is what got me thinking about this) mood and think about the nature of God and the nature of man. Again, great writing; if you ever have any other reflective poems I'd love to hear them.
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