Here are somepoems I wrote, please say something good or badI'd like to know what you think!
My shadow behind me lies,
From it’s fiery mouth comes angry cries.
Its eyes are a blaze,
With a furious daze,
We’re at constant war,
Bad is the score.
Inferno like rage,
In my shadow cage.
Spreading irritation,
Across all the nations.
Eclipsing the sun,
Destroying all fun.
The phantom which follows,
Leaves me empty and hollow.
Anguished gloom.
Rage brings doom.
But I have hope.
In Jesus, my rope.
My poems
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My poems
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faithfighter - Posts: 806
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I'll post more of them later.
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faithfighter - Posts: 806
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Fair, fair...
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.
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Why Fair fair?
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faithfighter - Posts: 806
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*smile good job ^_^ heh though i'm not into rhyme in a poetry *Mainly becuz i can't articulately rhyme and make the poem how i want it* lol but i like it ^^ keep it up ^^ look forward to more
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous
and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede
ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin
"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^
Nami
and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede
ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin
"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^
Nami
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girlninja - Posts: 388
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Thanks guys!!!!
Here is another 1. This is my newest and only one that doesn't rhyme. Its diferent then all my others.
I know it could have been different,
you didn't have to act like that.
With all the things you say,
I have a right to just stay away.
I know God wants us to beforgiving,
And with our lives to keep on living.
Why did you,
Act like this?
What did I do?
Why did you say those things?
Why did you have to hurt me?
I wish things were different.
I wish you hadn't acted like that.
I wish you don't say what you say.
I wish I could just stay away.
But I won't stay away.
Cause I love you.
Even with the things you say and do.
But I won't stay away.
Cause you need me.
Thats what God would want me to do.
I know this is very different then any I have ever made but I wanted to try something new.
More to come if they are wanted.
Here is another 1. This is my newest and only one that doesn't rhyme. Its diferent then all my others.
I know it could have been different,
you didn't have to act like that.
With all the things you say,
I have a right to just stay away.
I know God wants us to beforgiving,
And with our lives to keep on living.
Why did you,
Act like this?
What did I do?
Why did you say those things?
Why did you have to hurt me?
I wish things were different.
I wish you hadn't acted like that.
I wish you don't say what you say.
I wish I could just stay away.
But I won't stay away.
Cause I love you.
Even with the things you say and do.
But I won't stay away.
Cause you need me.
Thats what God would want me to do.
I know this is very different then any I have ever made but I wanted to try something new.
More to come if they are wanted.
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faithfighter - Posts: 806
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Good job, Faithfighter! This last one reminds me of one of a few poems I've written.
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone
And so hold on when there is nothing left in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!' ...you'll be a Man, my son!
Rudyard Kipling
Satan, bite the dust!
"You are not who your mistakes say you are; you are not the sum of your failures!"---Rev. Billy Miller
Proverbs 18:24
To serve your turn long after they are gone
And so hold on when there is nothing left in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!' ...you'll be a Man, my son!
Rudyard Kipling
Satan, bite the dust!
"You are not who your mistakes say you are; you are not the sum of your failures!"---Rev. Billy Miller
Proverbs 18:24
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Ssjjvash - Posts: 1073
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^_^ i like faithfighter ^^ heh you gave me an idea to write a poem on that subject actually ^_^ forgive me for the idea stealing ^^
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous
and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede
ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin
"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^
Nami
and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede
ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin
"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^
Nami
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girlninja - Posts: 388
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No prob steal away/
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faithfighter - Posts: 806
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