[quote="anonymous"]...
... are you
sure she's wearing something? sure doesnt look like it.......
and since you're a special friend of mine irl, i'll actually critique it ^-^ *cracks knuckles*
the wing structure is bad. you should know that. unless the wings are totally broken at the base, they should not droop that low. also the feathers should be divided into sections with an appearance suitable to their functions and not just look like long fluffy things sticking off of the wing frame. the girl herself looks anorexic, but since anime and manga tend to do that to further extremes than you anyways, i'll overlook that. here eyebrows look a bit long and they seem to go off her face. also might be a tiny bit high, or is that caused by the fact that they are too long.. arms might actually be a tiny bit long(elbow does not reach that far down to the waist..) and the hair would be far to long for her to let it droop around her like that. it would get annoying. also i think the hairline would start lower than that]
How did I know it was going to be long? -_-
Oh yeah, you're the one who's critiquing it....
for the third time, she is wearing Something! You should be able to tell, I think..
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The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom. and knowledge of the Holy One is understanding -provers 9:10
[/indent](Sorting things out, but will be back later.)