poem about a bone

Postby **Zarn Ishtare** » Wed Jul 10, 2013 3:47 am

My exposed femur
Is a proud white tower
Jutting out of a ruined landscape
If i were an ant
I would climb its proud peak
But i am not an ant
I am a man with a broken leg

Postby **Peanut** » Sun Jul 21, 2013 8:04 pm

So what you're saying is that you broke your arm.

Postby **Zarn Ishtare** » Mon Jul 22, 2013 11:33 pm

Man Peanut, I miss you.

Postby **Zarn Ishtare** » Wed Jul 24, 2013 9:20 pm

111 views. 4 of them are from me. Where are the comments?

Postby **GeneD** » Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:32 am

I feel like I should have something clever to say about the actual poem but I don't, so I'll just say I think it's cool and a little tragic, which is an acceptable response I hope.

That aside, what exactly did you do? Is it the first time you've broken anything or do you write poems about all your injuries?

Postby **Zarn Ishtare** » Thu Jul 25, 2013 2:05 pm

it's not about me, actually. It's about something rather gruesome; that is to say, IED injuries. I've seen a few of them; they aren't pretty, and in a perhaps morbid turn I decided to write this.

Postby **Zarn Ishtare** » Mon Jul 29, 2013 10:55 pm

216 views...come on folks, comment.

Postby **Lynna** » Thu Aug 22, 2013 3:22 pm

It made me laugh XD

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