A Rude Awakening

Postby **AdriTan** » Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:54 pm

She leads us down a decent length hallway to a decent sized bedroom. When I say his I mean an incredibly long hallway and a super sized bedroom.
"So what's this all about?" she asks Vince.
"You know the newbie, Martin the shaker? I believe that he was responsible for the earthquake. Where is he?"
As they se saying all this, Oscar elbows me, " Remember what I said her name means?"
Before I can say anything Ophelia answers, "At the dump hiding out."
"How do you know?" I ask
"Its her power. She helps people find lost things and people," Anastasia says as if I'm stupid.
I look at Vince, "So why didn't you just call her?"
"Because it only works if you ask her in person and she isn't allowed to walk very far on her own. I assume you want to come?" he asks her.
"Absolutely!" she grins.

Postby **AdriTan** » Tue Apr 24, 2012 10:11 pm

Writers block......stinks.

Postby **eightluvver888** » Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:25 pm

Awwww, get better from that horrible disease soon. It's a good story, so hurry up:P!
:jump:

Postby **AdriTan** » Thu Apr 26, 2012 11:06 pm

Haha thanx! I'll try to get over it as quick as possible!

Postby **AdriTan** » Thu May 24, 2012 8:48 pm

We get to the junk yard and look around, but the kid is not there.
"Ophelia, where is he now?" Vince asks.
But Ophelia looks confused. "I... I don't know."
"Oh no... " Oscar says.
"What?" I ask because the way he says it sounds worse than it should be.
"They're on to us. This just got a whole lot more complicated."
Suddenly from around a hill of trash a girl, about 16, comes out of nowhere.
"What have you done, Draila?" Vince asks. He seems really angry.
"What?" she asks in an innocent mock. "What have I done, Vincent?" Then her eyes glow brilliant yellow. "I didn't do anything at all, dearest," she says as she glows even more.
"What the heck is going on?!" I whisper to the others.
"Meet Vince's ex," says Ophelia.

Postby **AdriTan** » Sun Jun 17, 2012 1:41 pm

More to come I was gonna write just ran out of time.

Postby **AdriTan** » Sun Aug 12, 2012 4:22 pm

I hada to almost grave dig for this.....

Postby **Wolfsong** » Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:15 pm

Adri, this is awesome! I'm hooked, that's for sure.

I like your style, and this is getting really cool. Please, keep writing! If you get writer's block, maybe I could help? I write too, so I know just how it feels. Maybe we could help each other!

Postby **Red_web_city** » Thu Apr 04, 2013 6:00 pm

Blessed imagination you have.

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