Immortal: The Endless Shade

[KougaHane]

This is a book I'm working on based on a dream I had. Some of you may have seen my earlier thread about it. I typed up the first section and uploaded it onto this cool website, so you can read it here.
Right now it's sitting at 14 pages in that format, but only two pages when I put it in a word processor. Not a long read at all, but might be when it's finished. Probably not though. Please read and tell me what you think!:thumb: