Future Husband Poem

Postby **Desert Rose** » Sat Sep 13, 2008 9:07 pm

A world that shuns good
You are alive
Yet I can't see you

I wish to see your face
To meet the one who I will marry

Stay strong
For both of us
Our souls are eternal

*Just something I wrote.

Postby **jim_wijit** » Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:47 pm

Wow. That sent a shiver down my spine.

Postby **MBlight** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:17 am

jim_wijit (post: 1258882) wrote:Wow. That sent a shiver down my spine.

Same here...

Postby **Hana Ryuuzaki** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:15 pm

[font="palatino Linotype"]Wow.

Goes to show you, the best poems are the short ones that have so much emotion stuffed into them.[/font]

Postby **Evran** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:12 am

Desert Rose (post: 1258855) wrote:*Just something I wrote.

Don't sell yourself short, that was really well written.

Powerful, yet short and concise.

EDIT: It also changed my perspective on things somewhat. I can't thank you enough for that.

Postby **Desert Rose** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:49 am

Thanks, I honestly didn't think it was that good. :-)

Future Husband Poem

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