hey guys i am back with poetry well.. poem/song for now here you go
Fly on Wings of Glass
I'm flying high
never thinking
its always clicking
flying with wings of glass
they begin crack
I'm getting off track
they start to shatter
i feel like the Mad Hatter
trying not to fall
i'm running into a wall
let me stand tall
let these broken wings heal
do not leave me here broken
Pull me up, oh Father
and make me whole again
hope you guys like it
my new poem thread
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my new poem thread
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[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
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Althaia - Posts: 229
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[font="palatino Linotype"]This is beautiful, Altha-chan.
*nods*
I really like the imagery of glass.....[/font]
*nods*
I really like the imagery of glass.....[/font]
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Hana Ryuuzaki - Posts: 546
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very nice ^_^
and i like your rhyme scheme..I never could get that right so nice job!
and i like your rhyme scheme..I never could get that right so nice job!
I am on the forefront of battle against the demons of earth. All Praise and Glory be given to God Forever and Ever!
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thanks guys and if you have any ideas from more poetry pm me kay
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[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
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Althaia - Posts: 229
- Joined: Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:00 pm
- Location: is trying to calm herself
heres another one guys
Why?
why!?
why can't you see
what you're doing
doing to me
doing to yourself?!
don't let yourself
become enveloped in sadness
you need to know
i'm am here if you need me
you just have to call
raise your hand
and i will help you
you just need
to give me a chance
Why do you care about
what happens to me?
you are my freind
you are like a sibling
so please don't do this
there you go another one
Why?
why!?
why can't you see
what you're doing
doing to me
doing to yourself?!
don't let yourself
become enveloped in sadness
you need to know
i'm am here if you need me
you just have to call
raise your hand
and i will help you
you just need
to give me a chance
Why do you care about
what happens to me?
you are my freind
you are like a sibling
so please don't do this
there you go another one
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[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
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Althaia - Posts: 229
- Joined: Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:00 pm
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[color="DeepSkyBlue"]The Sea
the sea is as vast as my love for you
the sea with all its might
and all of its depth
shows what i mean
love can be rough
like a storm
whipping across
the sea
and yet
it can be calm
as the sea
when there is
no cloud in the sky
so my dear one
rember the sea
represents our love[/color]
the sea is as vast as my love for you
the sea with all its might
and all of its depth
shows what i mean
love can be rough
like a storm
whipping across
the sea
and yet
it can be calm
as the sea
when there is
no cloud in the sky
so my dear one
rember the sea
represents our love[/color]
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[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
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Althaia - Posts: 229
- Joined: Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:00 pm
- Location: is trying to calm herself
[font="palatino Linotype"]I like the imagery of both of these poems.
They're really thought-provoking....[/font]
They're really thought-provoking....[/font]
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[SIZE="1"][color="Plum"]WHY GOD MADE J-ROCK: Kamijo[/color][/SIZE]
[color="LightBlue"][SIZE="3"][font="Century Gothic"]Crucify My Love, If My Love Is Blind...[/SIZE][/color][/font]
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Hana Ryuuzaki - Posts: 546
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Broken Hearts
as walk i see
so much hurt
so little care
i feel their pain
but at the same time
i don't
for i know
we are all loved
by one man
someone who loves
guides
cares for us
so we won't fall
so we stand tall
that man
is my
Lord
Father
Savior
and
Friend
as walk i see
so much hurt
so little care
i feel their pain
but at the same time
i don't
for i know
we are all loved
by one man
someone who loves
guides
cares for us
so we won't fall
so we stand tall
that man
is my
Lord
Father
Savior
and
Friend
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[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
[color=cyan]†[size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]
procastinators unite.......................tommorrow
[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]
[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt
[/color]
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Althaia - Posts: 229
- Joined: Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:00 pm
- Location: is trying to calm herself
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