The Eternal Book ([very] Working Title)

[aalenfae]

Thanks for pointing out the capitalization mistake. I wouldn't have caught it.

[USSRGirl]

Interesting developments with the book. The fight scene was well-done too. The only thing that seemed kinda off was that the guard didn't notice that the gun wasn't loaded, since being a guard you'd think he'd be familiar with firearms. Unless he was too shaken up to pay much attention to it.

Oh yeah, Ashiel tis cool. I like his attitude.

[aalenfae]

I'm glad you noticed the gun thing. It's intentional that the guard (of all people) didn't notice. There was something else at work. It's a story point though, so I'm not gonna say the details.

[USSRGirl]

Oooh. I see. Well, don't spoil it then because I like unexpected twists.