Woah, this looks great
Name: Jagi Gortor.
Race: Human.
Birthplace: Nar Shadaar.
Rank: Padawan
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Apperance: Long black hair tied to a ponytail. Got a 'X' sorta scar that covers both of his eyes and his forehead. His eyes are not working all that well, but he wants to see through the force. He has made some progression, but little so far.
Clothes: He wears the standhard padawan uniform in the acadamy, his own set of clothes are mostly black and the material would be somewhat cheap, it was actualy the outfit he got when he was working for the goverment in Nar Shadaa.
Accessories: He got a personal computer that is pretty powerful, probably the most expensive equipment he has. He has made a custom lightsaber, nothing flashy there.
History: Born in the slums of Nar shadaa, he worked to make a liveing in the ganster controled enviorment inside a slum area. After a long and hard life he decided to fight crime that has plauged many of his friends since a early age, he managed to become a inside informant for the goverment, which he later found out was equaly corrupt as the gangsters. He was spotted by a Jedi master when he attempted to hold off parts of a gangster clan that wanted to enslave some of the poor children, he got badly damaged in the process *and the x cut appared at that scene* However the jedi managed to clear that up quite quickly. He is new to the academy, he is not in tone with all of the emotional jedi restrictions, but he wants to attend to help others in some of their actions. And he has not been the fastest progressor in terms of training, he has been patient and slow in progression, something that makes him wonder if they even want him to become a jedi one day.
Personality: This person loves to help others, he is not much of a combatant, however he has connections that can dig deep into some goverments. He wants to discover the nature of the force, but only to use in terms of aiding others. He is not strong in either use of agressive force technuiqes or lightsaber duels, however he has strong tactics and he is slowly manageing to see only through the force. His eyes won't last much longer, and it would be to expensive to have a opperation. He has however not agreed with the jedi code on all of its levels, something that has annoyed the masters to some extent. One of the more promt teachers said that he was doomed to become a sith if he continued like he did, however he is not familiar to that term.
Is this ok? o.o