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Postby Hitokiri » Tue May 08, 2007 4:00 pm

This is my first original story I wrote for my Intro to Fiction class.

Warning: Like my other story, fairly strong language with offensive subjects. This is edited.

[align=center]Remember This
I. Mountains
“You’re to godd*** proud.â€
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Postby Hitokiri » Tue May 08, 2007 4:01 pm

Continued....

[align=center]IV. Hands
These hands have killed many things: dreams, lives, marriages, love, and etcetera. These hands desire to experiment as does my mind. Thus I creates and create I do. Look at my hands. These hands are of a creator. I create dreams, life, and love. What have you? It does not matter. What matters in my realm of conscious is the drive to create. My grandmother created false dreams. My aunt created self-pity. My mom created bible studies. My old friend created a scar on my sister’s forehead. Jesus created miracles. I create mountains.

“Your hands? You can’t keep your d*** hands away from yourself.â€
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Postby Hitokiri » Tue May 08, 2007 4:01 pm

[align=center]V. Father
“Grow some balls.â€
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Postby Hitokiri » Mon May 14, 2007 6:51 am

Any comments?
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Postby harina » Mon Jul 23, 2007 1:36 pm

I really enjoyed reading it.

I'll probably read it once more ( I'm not a native English speaker you see.. ) also because I need to practice my English skills. ^_~ More comments after that...
Now faith is the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of things not seen. [Hebr. 11:1]
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