Manga Idea

[Animeniac]

I have this idea for a Manga caleed Operation Valkyrie. Operation Valkyrie is about how angels were sent down to earth and have to protect people from demons, they disguise as humans and live normal lives. The story begins with Satan's Rebellion towards God and the angels and fallen angels get separated. The main angels are going to be like the fruits of the spirit and the Demons are like the seven deadly sins. (Ex: Lust will be a commander of lustful demons and Peace will be commander of Peace-making angels.) The Main storyline is about Alice, the daughter of the Lead Valkyrie who is bullied for being a Retrieval Angel in Training (they call her a R.A.T). One day Satan's army ambushes the Angel Base and while defending Alice, her Mother turns into a demon. And with that experience Alice wants to train in the Valkyrie Training grounds so she can bring her mother back. The Manga will have real Angels in it such as: Micheal the Archangel and Gabriel and have Death Angels ETC. I'm still in the process of writing the storyline.

Tell me what you think Good?, Stupid? If you have ideas that will help this please post ALL OF THEM THANKS!

[skreyola]

Title sounds familiar. Very familiar.
Sounds exciting.
Some people will have theological qualms with angels falling not during the major spiritual cataclysms ("her Mother turns into a demon"), as well as with the idea of redeeming a fallen angel ("so she can bring her mother back").

[shooraijin]

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[Animeniac]

Title sounds familiar. Very familiar.
Sounds exciting.
Some people will have theological qualms with angels falling not during the major spiritual cataclysms ("her Mother turns into a demon"), as well as with the idea of redeeming a fallen angel ("so she can bring her mother back").

Yeah about that the angels fall after they rebel against Satan and she tries to get her mother back but she finds out in the end she can't and she has to kill her