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One P1ece

PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 1:55 pm
by taboo
Oh sweet, a webcomics forum! x3 Now we're talking!!

OK~ First, this is One P1ece, a 'parallel/alternate universe' of the One Piece Series. A friend (CosimicDebris again. For some reason we come up with the craziest ideas together so I just have to draw them) and I were talking about Sanji and Nami and it was like "what if Sanji didn't like Nami?" So it escalated into an entire ... somthing. So I decided to turn it into a comic (mostly for practice, and also I thought it would be fun). SO you probably won't get much of it if you've never read One Piece, in which case you're missing out like you have no idea; both with my comic and ESPECIALLY with the original series. I suppose it could be enjoyable without reading the original, it just won't be as funny.

Minimum age: Gah, that's difficult. 7+ I guess.... It's not for me to judge really.

Violence: 5 I suppose. Haven't really gotten that far yet, but just as a warning becuase there will be blood. It is a pirate story after all. As of now, 0.

Language: 2 at the very extreme most. Like maybe 'A' or 'D' and used only in extreme situations. But as of now, 0.

Sexual Content: 2 I suppose. No sex at all, but... one of the characters is a tad flamey.

Nudity (or skimpy outfits): 1 for now because I haven't fully written out the story. But as of now, it's 0.

Bad Religion: 2 just because it's about pirates. No magic or religion involved.

Other: 3 There will be alcohol and one of the characters is a chain smoker.

^ I'll update this as the story goes along. It should be about 3 chapters.


ONE P1ECE: a parallel universe of One Piece

Chapter 1
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Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9
Page 10

Chapter 1 is about 75% finished.

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:01 pm
by Rjdreamer
That is FREAKING HILARIOUS! *lol* I love the thoughtful Luffy!

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:12 pm
by Myoti
Somehow, I think Oda would be proud (if it has giant robots, you know he'd go for it XD ).

I found it funny that Sanji (he's short! :O ) was coughing during the Smoke Star, even though he was still smoking.

And WHAT THE SHIZ?! SOGEKING?! O.O

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:51 pm
by taboo
Myoti wrote:Somehow, I think Oda would be proud (if it has giant robots, you know he'd go for it XD ).
:O You know.... that's strikingly similar to a comic I wrote earlier in the year... Ya know what, if you download THIS ZIP FILE , you'll get all my earlier comics, including the Usopp doujinshi I forementioned and all my one-shots. There is some blood, and a bit of curseing. I hope 'crap' doesn't count. o__o Anyway, old old art from almost a year ago. Don't judge plz. x3 It's kinda interesting because I never knew how to draw Usopp before I made that, so I kinda had to force myself to.

I found it funny that Sanji (he's short! :O ) was coughing during the Smoke Star, even though he was still smoking.
xD You know, you're the second person that caught that, and I'm glad. All I can say is that I was afraid people wouldn't get the joke and secondly, I didn't want to take away from Sogeking's entrance.


XD Thanks guys, glad you like it so far! ^^ I should have two more pages by next friday so keep a look out.

PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 2:23 pm
by Myoti
I'm checkin' the old one now.

Oh, and I finally caught something about Luffy. When he shows up, he actually recognizes Sogeking! XD

And Chopper's scary. O.O

Also, is there a particular reason to Usopp having a mustache? :P

PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 3:03 pm
by taboo
Also, is there a particular reason to Usopp having a mustache?
Actually yes, but I'm not going to reveal all the inspiration I've had for this until it's finished. ^^

PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:21 pm
by Myoti
Ah, I see.

"OH MY GOSH, YOU KILLED FRANKY! Now Paulie will have to join the crew!" XD

PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:41 pm
by Silvanis
HILARIOUS! *claps*

PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:32 pm
by uc pseudonym
Usopp reminds me of Mario.

That aside, I like what I see. Interesting execution, so far. I'd like to see more of an apparently intelligent Luffy.

PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 8:02 pm
by taboo
Gah, I'm sorry but there won't be any new pages this week. Finals x__x

PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 8:21 pm
by Myoti
Ah. Same here.... kinda. :p

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 4:46 pm
by Mave
I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!

PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 9:18 am
by Myoti
I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!

You really should then. You may like it. ^_^

PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 12:26 pm
by Jack Bond
Mave wrote:I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!


same here.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:04 pm
by taboo
Woot, finally!

Page 9
Page 10

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:12 am
by Myoti
Yay, Taboo-sama! :D

"I do so like me spinach..." for some odd reason, I could so see Franky saying that.

And Zoro's flower disappeared! \o.o/

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:46 pm
by uc pseudonym
This is a welcome surprise. My apologies if you have already answered this, but how long of a comic do you have in mind?

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 9:45 pm
by taboo
I'm going for about 3 chapters worth. =/ I need to pick up the pace...

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:28 pm
by Tommy
Dang, only half of them show up. The rest is blocked.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 10:59 pm
by taboo
:/ Darn, that stinks. Here's a .zip file of all the pages thus far for you: http://h1.ripway.com/ragweed/op1ece.zip

PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 8:57 am
by Tommy
Soooooo.......out of character.

FUNNY!

PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 7:06 am
by Mave
3 chapters hmmm? Good good...more to look forward too. XD

PostPosted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 12:05 am
by bigsleepj
Just out of curiosity, is there going to be any updates? :grin: Just asking. :)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:29 pm
by taboo
Yes, there will be soon! =D

PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:17 pm
by bigsleepj
Ah good!! :grin:

PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:36 pm
by soul alive
Very funny! I'm a little out of the loop only having seen three or four episodes of the show. Lovely artwork though.

Completely off topic:
It threw me for a loop seeing taboo's and bigsleepj's avatars one after the other. They are fairly similar, what with the toothy, large nosed, black hat with white band-ed, left facing characters and all. lol

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:14 pm
by Goofy-Luffy
"And I do so likes me spinach." :lol:
That's really funny!


COOL! COOL! COOL! :lol:

I like.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 12:12 pm
by That Dude
I'm liking what I see so far.

PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 5:18 pm
by Goofy-Luffy
Any more? ? ? ?
Please? ? ? ?
With sugar on top? ? ? ?
So when are you going to do more? :thumb:

PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 3:46 pm
by taboo
:< I don't know, it's on temporary hiatus...