Hey Mai, great comic so far.
I've really enjoyed going through it, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story continues and what will happen with the estate, too.
Paris
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A sci-fi drama webcomic updating Thursdays.
PG-13. Rating description here.
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[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
A sci-fi drama webcomic updating Thursdays.
PG-13. Rating description here.
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CreatureArt - Posts: 1107
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Thank you <3 In chapter two it will go back to Paris and Auster and see who meets them at the train station.
Added pages 21 and 22. Sorry it has been so long and that they are a little messy. Better late then never -_-;
Added pages 21 and 22. Sorry it has been so long and that they are a little messy. Better late then never -_-;
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mai - Posts: 432
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Page 21 is a little less detailed than most of the others, but you really nailed the facial expression in the middle panel. The detail in the backgrounds of page 22 is nice, especially the curtain in the top panel. The tidbit of information about Jazzet is interesting, too; I look forward to reading more.
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Kaori - Posts: 1463
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Thanks ^-^
I drew page 22 before 21. Basically I drew a bunch of panels then pasted them together on the computer, which I dislike doing.
Hope you continue to like it!
I drew page 22 before 21. Basically I drew a bunch of panels then pasted them together on the computer, which I dislike doing.
Hope you continue to like it!
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mai - Posts: 432
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Added page 23 to Paris. chapter one is done, but I'm still going to add some notes and explanations to hopefully make it clearer.
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mai - Posts: 432
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Finally added 5 pages....*dies*
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mai - Posts: 432
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Ok, for some reason I can't edit my posts...Any way, I have a new website
here http://www.freespaces.com/thedarkgarden/index.html
I'm going to have a detailed rating for Paris on the website in a minute...
here http://www.freespaces.com/thedarkgarden/index.html
I'm going to have a detailed rating for Paris on the website in a minute...
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