!HELP! Need some VISCOM people to critique some work!!

[enishi]

Yeah, it's the night before the final project is due, and I just finished edits to my typography final. I was wondering if any of you people were Visual Communications majors or were savy in design could do a brief critique of my work? I need to write a short, yet detailed one page paper on what I can correct on.

Programs used on 1st piece were Photoshop CS. Remade the pictograms from stuff i found on google on the 72 olympics (work the typographer/designer made), and included stuff on his font creations.

Program used in 2nd piece was Illustrator 10. It would have been AWESOME if i had quark, but i dont so i set all type by hand. My entire paper is included in the 3 type boxes.

.. so I hope I manage to catch a few people who can help me out, if ya can that'd be sweeeeet. thanks for your time and help! -josh