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Here's another poem I wrote. This one was actually based on something that happened... more or less. Please comment

Forsaken Love

I wanted to say 'I like you,'
To confess my crazy love.
Whene'er I had thoughts of you,
My soul flew like a dove.

My heart was ever willing,
My flesh and bones were weak.
Whenever I was near you,
I could barely even speak.
I never used my chances;
I let them all pass by.
After every time it happened,
I'd tilt my head and cry.

Over a year had passed
And you found out indirectly.
But when I heard that you just laughed
I knew you didn't respect me.

I tried to leave my love forsaken
And put it all behind.
But even if I try to forget,
It will never leave my mind.

Now I mourn with a broken heart
That nothing can seem to mend.
Before you could even let them start,
You put our chances to end.

That was really good! It must have taken you awhile to fit all the words together just right. Are you going to post more?

nice poem, i think it's really good.

Awesome poem, Gekkeiju! I could never do anything as good as that. Hope you post more. ^^