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search (Comments/whatever, anyone?)

PostPosted: Sun May 30, 2004 5:31 pm
by antefurem
It's... abstract. Egads!

Word of advice: I do everything on purpose. Every element is important! :sweat:

With that said... poem!



MAN,
today, to TOmorrow
i want to BEliEve
the truth, VEiNs of hope,
that run(s) through today’S
mind
[hEAR] the noise
of the mysterious catCH slipping away
and fallING,
chasing strings of life
it IS STILL
at times
A MYSTERY
(seems to have no end)

PostPosted: Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:08 am
by true_noir_chloe
Man to be even searching is still a mystery? Is that what you were wanting us to find?

Anyway, nice. ^_^ There is a wall called sin and as long as that wall is there man will always be searching. The search ends when the wall is removed by a cross, a Savior, a life that has never stood behind a wall.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:16 am
by antefurem
There is something more to this poem to the capital letters. ^__^

Look at what remains after taking out the capitals.

(Like I said, I don't do anything without purpose. Haha.)

I suppose my poem can be taken as a protest - why are people still searching while the answer's right in front of them? It (the search) seems to have no end - however, there is an end! ^___^