My First Story,
PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2004 2:12 pm
ive only wrote the first chapter as im not very good at grammar, this is a gundam wing story i hope people would like it and help me.
well here goes nothing...
Gundam Wing
Chapter one;
It’s been just over five years and the war has ended between the earth sphere unified nation and colony L3X18999 were Marimaya, Treize Kushrinada’s secret daughter declared war and independence against the nation.
The pilots have now split up and gone their own chosen ways.
Relena was walking around the enchanted garden, the wind was gentle but wiped her hair harshly against her face, her thoughts were empty and endless, and Lt Luckreza Nion accompanied her. They both walked until they came to an opening through the bushes where there was an old tree, they both sat down on the old mahogany bench beside the old withered willow tree.
“Cheer up Relena; you’ve been like this since…â€
well here goes nothing...
Gundam Wing
Chapter one;
It’s been just over five years and the war has ended between the earth sphere unified nation and colony L3X18999 were Marimaya, Treize Kushrinada’s secret daughter declared war and independence against the nation.
The pilots have now split up and gone their own chosen ways.
Relena was walking around the enchanted garden, the wind was gentle but wiped her hair harshly against her face, her thoughts were empty and endless, and Lt Luckreza Nion accompanied her. They both walked until they came to an opening through the bushes where there was an old tree, they both sat down on the old mahogany bench beside the old withered willow tree.
“Cheer up Relena; you’ve been like this since…â€