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Rebirth

PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 7:30 pm
by Wolfsong
Here, the sands fly through the air
Here, the water rages against the shore
Here the sky rains fire and brimstone
Here my world ends aflare

Here I stand on rocky shoal
Buffeted by elements and beaten by words
Memories of things that haunt my soul

A scream rents the air

I take hold of nothing, there is nothing to claim
All my false strengths and lies have left me
I am laid out, naked and ashamed
All my faults, guilt and dreams for the world to maim

Here I lie on soil my flesh to rend
I choose to give way to the pain inside
My soul to the netherworld will descend

A lost cry; the storm dies

At once I hear you cry my name
At once I hear you scream for my pain
My heart burns to answer but
My fear holds me down

Yours hands take hold
You refuse to let go
Persistently you call my name

My eyes open

Instantly the storm's reborn
Dark hands despairing reach out for me
You hold me tight against your breast
You refuse the darkness me even to see

You lead me safely through the storm
And though I want to give in and die
You refuse to lose the fight

My soul returns to me

Your hands I hold
Your light I keep
Forever this love I have
Burning within me deep

You showed me the way when hope was lost
You gave me life when I gave up
You gave me hope where I had none

A soul is reborn

Re: Rebirth

PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2014 7:08 pm
by ClaecElric4God
Only just getting to this but...I think I have a legitimate excuse.
Anyways, this is really nice, Wolf. I like the feel. It's very...sincere and deep.

Re: Rebirth

PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:56 am
by SincerelyAnomymous
That was pretty good, so many feels.

Re: Rebirth

PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 2:06 pm
by Panda4christ:3
Really beautiful :) Good job, Wolf ^^

Re: Rebirth

PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 5:52 pm
by Wolfsong
Thanks guys. Your responses mean a lot.