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Voltage's Thread fer stories!
PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 7:18 am
by Voltage
Heyyo, I'm kinda new, but I just figured it this was the place where I could put my writing out there, I would do it here!
I'll update lots!
(Sorry if it bothers you, but I have a problem with capitalizing things when need be... and when need NOT be...)
PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 5:56 am
by seaglass27
Can't wait to read your stuff!
PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 11:34 am
by Voltage
First Poem;
Pressure to be perfect, the need to be cool
Zombie walks, almost sleeping between home and school
Makeup & perfume, bracelets and rings
your whole week ruined by one little thing
Worried about grades going nowhere but down
Way to worried about when college will come 'round
Boys that we like who never look our way
Best friends & iPods get us through the day
Drama, backstabbing, rumors and lies
Moments when you fall apart and just want to cry
Feeling bad about ourselves with no reason said
Walking around your feet feeling like lead
Those desperate days when nothing goes right
Feeling alone on sleepless nights
Finding our way through this mixed up world,
welcome to the life
of a teenage girl
PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2011 3:39 am
by sarahjoy78
WOW! That is SO true!!!! That was amazing! Great Job!
PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 2:14 pm
by seaglass27
That poem describes high school well.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:33 pm
by AdriTan
I agree that this pretty much describes high school! i don't Mind IF your caPitalIZation is WacKY as long as you don't mind my spelingg