Age Of Romance
PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 12:34 pm
Since my thread has been abandoned....here ya go.
An Age Of Romance
"Wedding Night"
"Carry me gently over the grass" she breathed to me
it's no mystery, we're fulfilling our love
her cheeks like dove wings shot through with roses
the blossom of her blush a bouquet
flowing from her throat
the moonlight flowing like teardrops, clinging to her hair
that shown in the pale moonlight.
the grace of her lace spread out before me
under the eyes of the stars...
...Tonight is ours.
An Age Of Romance
"Wedding Night"
"Carry me gently over the grass" she breathed to me
it's no mystery, we're fulfilling our love
her cheeks like dove wings shot through with roses
the blossom of her blush a bouquet
flowing from her throat
the moonlight flowing like teardrops, clinging to her hair
that shown in the pale moonlight.
the grace of her lace spread out before me
under the eyes of the stars...
...Tonight is ours.
It's filled with similes and metaphors... making it a powerfully descriptive poem. I like it a lot! Keep up the great work.