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Future Husband Poem
PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 9:07 pm
by Desert Rose
A world that shuns good
You are alive
Yet I can't see you
I wish to see your face
To meet the one who I will marry
Stay strong
For both of us
Our souls are eternal
*Just something I wrote.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:47 pm
by jim_wijit
Wow. That sent a shiver down my spine.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:17 am
by MBlight
jim_wijit (post: 1258882) wrote:Wow. That sent a shiver down my spine.
Same here...
PostPosted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:15 pm
by Hana Ryuuzaki
[font="palatino Linotype"]Wow.
Goes to show you, the best poems are the short ones that have so much emotion stuffed into them.[/font]
PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:12 am
by Evran
Desert Rose (post: 1258855) wrote:*Just something I wrote.
Don't sell yourself short, that was really well written.
Powerful, yet short and concise.
EDIT: It also changed my perspective on things somewhat. I can't thank you enough for that.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:49 am
by Desert Rose
Thanks, I honestly didn't think it was that good. :-)