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new story...too lazy to write!

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 8:54 pm
by 12praiseGOD
okay guys heres the deal, I though of this story and would really like to see it out, but I'm way to lazy and not so good of writter as some of you guys, so I was wondering if any of you were interested in writting it...
here is the main story...
THe princess of France is captured the night of the ball in which she is to meet this prince from England or somewere like that, They both speek English! THe princess has a servant that is a very good friend with her, and looks a lot like her. The servant doesn't know that the bucher's son, who is quite attractive, is inlove with her. The night of the ball, since the princess is unable to attend the king decides to have the servant trained to act like the princess, and to dance with the prince, who is very attractive also. The night goes great and the prince invites her for lunch , so she accepts according to the command of her "dad" the king,supposedly. THey go on these series of dates, and they fall enlove, but then the real princess is found and the truth has to be revealed, yet it is revealed after the wedding arrangements have been made.
What will the prince do, disregard and disown the crown and marry a servant, of which he is inlove, or dump her in order to keep the crown and mary the real princess, of which he doesn't know very well? This is were you ask what matters most loyalty to the crown, or true love?

You can add all types of twists and turns to the story, please tell me what you think about it...please =) and sorry about the grammar...

GOD BLESS YOU!!!! huggles:hug:

PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 7:17 am
by Stephen
Moved to the right area.

PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:15 pm
by Esoteric
I have a feeling that the old adage, If you want something done, you'll have to do it yourself also applies to writing stories. I could be wrong and someone may be willing to write it, but my suggestion is to fight your laziness and work on it yourself. The more you work at improving, the better your writing skills will become and the easier it will be. Good luck to you.

PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:42 pm
by 12praiseGOD
thanks...*scratches head*...I'll try I guess.