CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

Ok this is a short story I started a few years ago, it is unfinished I was hoping people would tell me what they think.

The Mission

Traveling down Highway 10 came two young men. They were going to a park to spend one last day with their high school friends before they all went off to college.
“Just think, soon we’re getting out of this placeâ€

Well...to be perfectly honest, it feels rushed. Problems with punctuation (i.e. lack of question marks) combined with typos...

After about the a group of teens busted through the forest.

...make it a little hard to follow the dynamics of what's going on. My advice? Slow down a bit and read it out loud to help yourself catch problem sentences.
But aside from the format problems, the story could be a good one about self discovery. Keep working on it.