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I wrote this mainly in a couple of nights of depressed inspiration! I had the idea for a long time, though. It's a short side-story to my novel, "Dreamer's Rhlem", but one does not have to have read that to understand this story, I think. I'm still polishing "Dreamer's Rhlem", anyway. I posted the first chapter to it here a while back.

Anyway... this short side-story has one of the main characters, a man who is over three-hundred years old, talking to an immortal character specific to this short story (ie. Ashe' does not appear in the main novel).

Read, review, enjoy?

http://rhlem.net/burdens.html

I love this! Great work. You're a very talented writer.

*clapping* That is the most impressive thing I have ever read from you, Shadsie. I was left breathless by it's deep insight and by your delicate handling of a very personal conversation. I could actually envision the scene as they spoke and their voices, quiet and melancholy.

^_^ Very, very good. Thanks for sharing it.

Hmm, that was pretty cool, Shadsie. I'm a terrible critic so I'll leave it at that :]

This was very good ^_^.. you are a very talented writer!