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I need a name!!

Postby *Hope* » Sun Dec 28, 2003 5:38 pm

Please, anyone, I need a name for a character in a stroy i'm writing.
Bio so far

Name: ????
Age:24
Height: 6'2"
Weight: no idea what average weight for a guy that height is
Eye color: sky blue
Hair color and style: raven black, short, um for lack of an example, kinda like Vash's when Vash's is wet in that one ep

Personality: very kind and sweet, a true gentlmen, a devote christian, he has a troubled past that he finds hard to talk about, compassionate, he will fight when pushed

Other: Well, hm, the book's kinda a sci-fi but that doesn't really matter, orphaned, physically strong, has eyes you can fall into, handsome *blushing smiley* (sorry ppl, i had to make him handsome)

That should just about do it. Any suggestions?
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Postby inkhana » Sun Dec 28, 2003 7:52 pm

Do you want a common name or a made-up-type name?


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Postby Lochaber Axe » Sun Dec 28, 2003 8:10 pm

Also what nationality? You know is he European or Asian? This would help a lot.
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Postby TheMelodyMaker » Sun Dec 28, 2003 8:24 pm

I suggest Fred.
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Postby Ashley » Sun Dec 28, 2003 8:34 pm

Dorian is the first thing I think of, mostly because that description reminds me of Dorian Gray. I also see Eric working too.
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Postby Icarus » Sun Dec 28, 2003 8:49 pm

While I can't think of a name off hand, I might be able to help with the weight. I am about that height myself, and at 170, am accounted a bit thin. I'd say 180-185 for someone who is lean and muscular, with upwards of 200 for a man that is powerfully built.
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Sun Dec 28, 2003 9:16 pm

Eric is a good strong name because it means, "eternal ruler." Dorian is Greek and means, "of the sea."

I suggest:

Any variation of Nick or Nicholas, which means a "victor of the people." If he's going to be your hero

Seth, it means, "anointed."

Branduff or Brainard means, "a dark raven." You could go with a similar sounding Brant, Brent, or Brandon, which have slightly different meanings.

I'll try to find some more. I like Eric. I always think of the prince in the Disney version of The Little Mermaid.

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beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


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Postby Quiet Hood » Mon Dec 29, 2003 1:27 am

Danyael or Zophael...or Pyriel...^_^

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Postby *Hope* » Mon Dec 29, 2003 8:21 am

Oh my!!! So many wonderful names!!! I kinda like Dorian, not decided for sure yet tho. Um, Ink, made-up type name, and he's white/caucasion. (did i spell that right?)
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Mon Dec 29, 2003 12:34 pm

Is he a good guy or a bad guy? There's also Tristan (full of sorrows, noisy, or knight depending), Aiden (fire) and Griffin. I like Griffin because it's Welsh and it means, "strong in faith." There's some more of my two cents. ^^ How much am I up to?

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You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


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Postby *Hope* » Mon Dec 29, 2003 1:50 pm

Aiden, that's nice. But so is Tristan, Ack!! lol He's a good-guy. I wish i could draw!!! I love picking names for their meanings. I'm in the process of writing the part were i need his name. I got to decide. Let me ponder for a bit. Anybody got anything else besides these other wonderful names?
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Postby SageRock » Mon Dec 29, 2003 3:57 pm

Dane/Dayne, Ronald/Ronnie, Jacob/Jake, Michael, Alexander, Adrian, Anthony, Steven/Stephen, Paul, Tory, Tanner, Ophus...
I have no idea about the meanings, sorry. Of course the spellings of any name can be altered to make it seem more fantastic, or more sci-fi.
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Postby ShiroiHikari » Mon Dec 29, 2003 5:50 pm

I think another name related to "dark" in meaning is Donavan/Donovan or however you wanna spell it. Aiden/Aidan is a pretty one...I've used that one before ^^; Your character has the same hair and eye color as one of mine. Isn't the dark-hair-light-eyes thing so cool? ^___^

Edit: Hey SageRock, "Adrian" is one of my favorite names(used that one already too :P) ^_^ I think its meaning has something to do with "dark" too.
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Postby Danyasaur » Mon Dec 29, 2003 6:44 pm

how bout' Avery, or, Fuast, *that one I made up, I like made up names ^_^* or, Durain? *also made up ^_^*
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Postby Kesshin » Tue Dec 30, 2003 8:45 am

I also had trouble when deciding what to name one of my characters, but for some reason I have little trouble giving other people advice. Go figure. I like Chloe's suggestion of Griffin. I personally suggest Joel.
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Postby Kisa » Thu Jan 01, 2004 4:38 pm

I like Aiden.
I have a similar character who I named Zeke.
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Postby Keito-chan » Thu Jan 01, 2004 4:54 pm

Mirko...my friends called that ^^ or landon, harley..umm joan hehe ummm
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Postby Shao Feng-Li » Thu Jan 01, 2004 4:57 pm

you know "Mordecai" is found in the Bible and means "most excellent man..." hmm? OR Micah (the prophet) sounds cool too
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Postby Icarus » Fri Jan 02, 2004 11:29 pm

Though I will never name any of the children I might have at some point in the future this, I've always been partial to the name Jonathan *God's Gracious Gift*

Interestingly, my first and middle names have now been suggested
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Postby nekochan » Sat Jan 03, 2004 2:09 am

hmm..well I like Orin, Draken, Seiya (means blue sword),Saima is nice to! I've used all these names in stories I've made ^^ . I made up all the names exept for Seiya ans Saima,I got those from playing with some Japanese words(forgot what Saima means though ^^;; sorry!) I also like Aiden (i've used that one in a story before too)
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Postby *Hope* » Sun Jan 04, 2004 1:46 pm

Thankies!!! Those are all great names! I've finally decided and go figure, it's the name of a game my friend is in love with (the prequel andyways) . It's Riven. I'm not sure how you say it but i pronounce it Ree (ryhmes with see) ven (ryhmes with pen).
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Postby Danyasaur » Sun Jan 04, 2004 3:02 pm

BelldandyMewMew wrote:I have a similar character who I named Zeke.


THAT'S BY BROTHER'S NAME! *well actualy it's Daniel but his middle name is Ezekeiel (did I spell that right? O_O") and he likes it better so he goes by Zeke*
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Postby Thomas J. R. » Mon Jan 05, 2004 7:17 pm

For your character, is he tuff? If he has fairly big muscles, try 200 pounds or little more. That should be acurate. Try it, and see what happens.
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Postby LostChild » Sun Nov 21, 2004 7:54 am

Cephas wrote:The sequel to Myst....?


yup, the sequel to Myst, awesome game, but it can never hold my attention for more that about an hour. :drool: anyways... sorry that i didn't get here sonner to help ya pick out a name. if ya still want my advice, i normally use one of my friend's names, or a favorite character from the Bible. :hug:
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