CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

PostPosted: **Fri Apr 13, 2007 7:12 pm**

....I decided to post this as a singular piece. It will be interesting..hmmmm...

"The Late Replyâ€

PostPosted: **Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:32 am**

That rocked. Maybe even rawked. You get brownie points with me for mentioning gnomes of course. I liked "Cruci-fiction"... that was cool.

PostPosted: **Sat Apr 14, 2007 9:15 am**

Dunedan wrote:That rocked. Maybe even rawked. You get brownie points with me for mentioning gnomes of course. I liked "Cruci-fiction"... that was cool.

is that intentional irony right there?

"Brownie" Points?

PostPosted: **Sat Apr 14, 2007 7:40 pm**

You'll never really know... I have an impish sense of humor.

PostPosted: **Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:10 pm**

Hehe.

Well, I have to say that while I glean quite a few things from your poems, I often am left not quite understanding a lot of them. That doesn't stop me enjoying them, though. ^_^
I'm not sure if it was a deliberate mispelling, but you wrote 'counter-fit'. Perhaps this was referring back to the idea of the bottles, cramped spaces etc, or maybe it should be 'counter-feit'?
Either way, t'is good. I really enjoy your poetry, Zarn. ^_^

PostPosted: **Mon Apr 16, 2007 6:59 pm**

What do you mean by play with me, anyways?

PostPosted: **Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:18 pm**

Dunedan wrote:What do you mean by play with me, anyways?

Ask She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Blamed.

PostPosted: **Tue Apr 17, 2007 8:56 pm**

In the spring of the night,
In the fall of your ironic eyes
Why does this play we might
Spread upon me mayonnaise

-To She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Blamed