you will be impressed! I certainly was!!!
Fing Fang Foom
Prologue
Unlike most Fan Fics, this story does not take place in an alternate dimension... instead, this story takes place two hundred years after the end of DragonBall GT, all the members of the Earth Special Forces having died and moved into the afterlife long ago. The descendents of the Saiy-Jins still train on earth, unfortunately, most of the Saiy-Jin offspring were hunted down at a young age and slaughtered by the Anti-Saiy-Jin task force, the last remnants of Frieza's once mighty army. Now only fifty Saiy-Jins remain, and only fifteen of them having reached the coveted level of Super-Saiy-Jin. The tales of levels past Super-Saiy-Jin having been lost in the sands of time... But one legend remains, that of the four great Super-Saiy-Jins, this legend passed down to all generations of Saiy-Jins. These Saiy-Jins are remembered by all as the four great Super-Saiy-Jins:
Trunks: "The warrior of FuturePast", once two men, one, an adult from another timeline, the other, a young man of our time, the two forced to fuse to preserve each others lives. A Human-Saiy-Jin hybrid. Rumored to have surpassed Super-Saiy-Jin. Died of old age
Gohan: "The Mystic Saiy-Jin', a Human-Saiy-Jin hybrid, told to become exponentially powerful when angered, also rumored to have surpassed Super-Saiy-Jin. Died of old age.
Vegeta: "The Prince of Saiy-Jins", one of the last two pure-blooded Saiy-Jins, named after his home planet, Vegeta was told to once be one of the greatest enemies the earth had ever faced, until changed by the face of good. Again, rumored to have surpassed Super-Saiy-Jin. Died of old age
Goku: "The Pure One", his power surpassed only by his pure heart. The second pure-blooded Saiy-Jin, legends tell that his power was second to none, told to have defeated all that came before him, never surrendering, the true power of a Saiy-Jin. Disappeared after the defeat of the Evil Dragons.
"KA..... MEH.....HAH...MEH..." The fighter stood strong, knees bent, hands cocked at his side. Energy and power could be felt seeping from his very being, his black hair flowing in the wind. "HAAAAA!!!!!!!!" His hands shot forward, his entire body stiffened, as he launched a blinding beam of energy toward what appeared to be a star floating before him.
The fighter screamed as his body stiffened further, his hair shot upwards against the wind, his pupils changed from dark black to a light shade of blue, the large beam of energy still plunging into the heart of the star. "nhh...uh, AHHHHH!" His hair stood on end, and shifted, changing colour, not a natural color, but a gleaming golden mass of spikes. His eyebrows, and the long tail flailing behind him also change to this golden shade.
His body changed further, his muscles convulsed, his expression grew serious. The large spikes in his hair separated, moving farther apart and solidified. Electricity crackled about him.
Light shot upward from his feet, engulfing him until all that was visible was the powerful attack flowing through his hands. The light, died down, again the man stood changed. Now long hair flowed behind him, a single bang hung from his forehead, and his eyebrows had been burnt away. "Harder.... most go farther..." he mumbled under his breath.
Energy could be seen flowing off him, growing in intensity, the orange and blue Gi (uniform) covering his chest ripped apart, as the fighter underwent one last transformation. Red energy consumed him, his hair shortening, his eyebrows returning and changing to a dark black once more. Crimson red hair grew quickly around his chest, back and arms. The tail, also changed from bright gold to dark crimson.
His eyes squeezed shut. As he opened them, they changed from light blue to dark yellow, with a black pupil. "Not far enough..." He pushed himself further, all of his body breaking into heavy sweat. He screamed out in pain as his body flashed with light, his hair shot up once more, and all the hair on his body pulsed with golden power... he began to changed once more. His eyes opened wide, his hands shot to his chest, stopping the flowing energy wave. He clutched his heart, and fell to his knees. "Couldn't do it... uh... wasn’t able to take the next... step." He crumpled to the floor, fast asleep.
For hours he remain motionless, worn, but not beaten, it was as it always was, he would awaken, and continue his training, for he was the last of the Super-Saiy-Jins, Son Goku.
Chapter 2 - Shenlong, the Eternal Dragon
Limbo, an endless universe. It is nothing and everything. One properly trained, can manipulate his surroundings, creating many objects, such as stars. One can create training simulations, challenges and non-living opponents; it is the fighter’s dream world.
In the center of this universe, sat its only two occupants. The only two living things that even knew of its existence, the immortal Super-Saiy-Jin warrior, Goku, and the Eternal guardian of the DragonBalls, Shenlong. To those in the normal universe, Shenlong and Goku had disappeared with the DragonBalls two centuries ago (at the end of DBGT), but, in truth, they had been moved to this dimension. Goku had been granted immortality when he had absorbed the DragonBalls, and Shenlong had brought him here.
Over the past two centuries, Goku had acted as a silent guardian of his Saiy-Jin race, returning to earth only when his race, and his adopted planet were in danger. He acted mysteriously, so not one person ever knew of his silent visits. When he remained in Limbo, Shenlong taught him. She longs great knowledge of the universe amazed Goku, the Dragon had taught Goku to manipulate time and space, improving his own techniques, and learning new ones.
Now, they sat, having a complicated conversation about, of all things, creation. Goku had grown tired of this conversation, and quickly changed the subject. "Shenlong," he asked, "Why did you bring me to this place all those years ago?" Goku had often asked Shenlong this question, but had never gotten a straight answer. "Well, you may not know it, but many millennia ago, you race, the Saiy-Jins, were a pure-hearted, peaceful people. Until touched by the cold hand of Freiza, they had wanted only peace. When you appeared on earth, I became frightened that you would bring an end to the human race, but fortunately, you suffered a head injury that erased the programming that forced you to be evil, from that moment on, you were what you entire race had once been. You were a peaceful, pure-hearted boy." Shenlong explained. "I watched as you grew, always increasing in power, and I watched as your young son, Gohan grew, and shared you pure heart. I realized as I watched your immense power grow, I realized that the true power of a Saiy-Jin came from there heart. Your brother, Radditz, the Saiy-Jin elite Nappa, could never reach the power you did, because they wanted only to cause pain. Even Vegeta, only reached his true power when his heart became pure. I brought you here to protect you race, and to insure that they never became cold and evil again." Goku listened in amazement. He had never realized that the race that had destroyed planets, was ever peaceful. He thanked Shenlong, and walked off, thinking, determined to use his new knowledge to become more powerful.
Goku had thought long, and now, he stood in the abyss. Through willpower alone, he created a massive, flickering sun in front of himself. Reaching down, he pulled his shirt off. Something flashed across his eyes, his hair became gold, and grew longer, then shorter, and became black once more. He stood, his red fur moving in the wind, he had become the Super-Saiy-Jin 4. Cocking his arms at his side, he began; "Kameh.... hahmeh... HAAA!!!" With this, the massive energy attack called the Kamehahmeha shot forth from his hands. Slamming into the star, the beam intensified in power. Grunting in pain, Goku pushed on further. Finally, the star began to collapse. Goku stood tall. A massive explosion blew him off his feet. Debris flew everywhere. When the everything died down, Goku lay, asleep once more, but when he awoke, he would be more powerful than ever