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"A Warning To The Unrequited"
PostPosted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 9:14 pm
by Zarn Ishtare
“A Warning To The Unrequitedâ€
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 11:01 am
by Anna Mae
This strikes me as somewhat different than some of your other poems, yet it is still very much you. You use some good imagery here, but my favorite line was this:
These words do struggle in the dust with one another,
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 11:49 am
by Zarn Ishtare
I'm glad you think so, becuase I loathe this thing. It's not really a poem, more of a rant...and it came out so AWKWARD when I spoke it...
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 6:33 pm
by Animus Seed
My favorite bit is "Look! I speak from uninspiration!"