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"Dwelling Against The Day"
PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 7:49 am
by Zarn Ishtare
“Dwelling Against The Dayâ€
PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 11:56 am
by Chibi_wolf454
Aww sweet ^^ I love it
PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:29 pm
by Anna Mae
Your title is my favorite part. It reminds me of that one hymn (For I know whom I have believ-ed, and am persuaded, that he is able, to keep that, which I've committed, unto him against that day...) My second favorite part is the third line. That is a unique, poetic way to put it.
As to the rest, as usual, your meaning remains a mystery.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:58 pm
by Chu-Chu
Pretty ^^
PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 9:25 am
by Zarn Ishtare
Who would like me to explain the meaning of this poem?
I'll set up a voting poll.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:32 pm
by Zarn Ishtare
Well, time to explain...
This poem is basically about a few days a week or so ago, when I was having certain dreams. Obviously its not completely the same, but its where the inspiration comes from.
I'm a janitor right now, so I sweep. And the dust never seems to stop coming...its this endless cloud around me.
The cleaner for the metal stalls is crap.
my bike chain broke again.
then the dream which was very good...
then I had a day of cleaning... and sweeping..and moping about work...
then a really really good dream.
and thats it!