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Deeper Down

PostPosted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:24 pm
by Zarn Ishtare
OOC: Don't be worried about the depression, folks, this is how I get it out, rather than more boring forms like punching pillows or what have you.



“Deeper Downâ€

PostPosted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:45 pm
by QtheQreater
(sigh)

You know, Zarn, your writings creep me out...mostly because I feel like I know what you're talking about...

<.< >.>

Now *I* sound weird...

PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:31 am
by Zarn Ishtare
Not really....eh.....


weirdness is, like all things, in the eyes of the beholder.

PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 6:26 pm
by Anna Mae
Your ending surprised me. Why did you decide to end the poem in that way? You have good descriptions though.

PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:37 pm
by Zarn Ishtare
Images dwell inside of us long after their cause is gone.

Again, the memories of people often haunt us, even though that person still lives.


It haunts is a crying out of those who still haunt my mind.....family, friends, special people...