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Deeper Down
PostPosted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:24 pm
by Zarn Ishtare
OOC: Don't be worried about the depression, folks, this is how I get it out, rather than more boring forms like punching pillows or what have you.
“Deeper Downâ€
PostPosted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:45 pm
by QtheQreater
(sigh)
You know, Zarn, your writings creep me out...mostly because I feel like I know what you're talking about...
<.< >.>
Now *I* sound weird...
PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:31 am
by Zarn Ishtare
Not really....eh.....
weirdness is, like all things, in the eyes of the beholder.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 6:26 pm
by Anna Mae
Your ending surprised me. Why did you decide to end the poem in that way? You have good descriptions though.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:37 pm
by Zarn Ishtare
Images dwell inside of us long after their cause is gone.
Again, the memories of people often haunt us, even though that person still lives.
It haunts is a crying out of those who still haunt my mind.....family, friends, special people...