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Writings in the dust.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:45 am
by starstoryteller
Comments please Now on with the story.
“Yeshua has come back from the Mount Olives! Now that rabble riser is in the temple court spreading his blasphemy!â€
PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 7:12 pm
by Photosoph
VERY COOL! Well written, with interesting characters and I liked the pace at which you moved the story along. I enjoyed this heaps; and it's so cool to read a work of fiction based off the bible. ^_^ Great job, StarST!
PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 11:32 am
by starstoryteller
I'm glad you liked it. I really apreashate comments
PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:27 pm
by Photosoph
No problem. ^_^ Like I said, I really enjoyed reading this.
THough just as a small bit of advice, there are a few spelling mistakes you could go back and fix. Other than that, everything else in the story was fine.