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Um ok alot of my poetry suggests that I am insane..........Oh yes um I'm not Most of these were written during times that I felt depressed or mad.Sorry about my spelling in addvance I can't spell worth crap.

[color=DeepSkyBlue]Rain Falls[/color]

The rain falls on my face
Drinches my skin
Cool drop run down my back

The rain falls in my mind
Washing away the worrys
Cool drops flow in my mind

The rain falls on the earth
Drumming sweet melodys to the weak and the strong
The rain sings her song to all
And cool drops sooth everything.

[color=DarkRed]Cracked[/color]

Creeping about my mind
Nothing but mist and thunder
The darkness echos resounding crys of anger and pain.

So I sit in solitude bleeding,broken.

Can you see the scars?
Why I have nothing to hide.
Can you see the smile of insanity slowly spreading acroos my face?

I'm not quite there..
Can you see it?

The end will come soon...are you ready for it?

[color=SeaGreen] Greatist Weakness[/color]

Silent tears,Soundless crys
Breath comes in quick gasps, Heart beats faster still

Eyes wide, Mind races throught thoughts of death

Fists balled, fingers drawing blood

Teeth clinched, Body trembles
Fear............
Human's greatist weakness is Fear

The only thing you should fear is fear its self.

[color=DarkRed] Meanings[/color]

Weird is an illusion of normal
Normal is a wisp of nothing
Nothing is everything
Everything is meaningless
We are all caught in the spin of the wheel of life
Go with the turn and lose your future.

Strange is a fragment of sorrow
Sorrow is the passing rements of light
Light is a cruel joke formed by the shadows
Shadows are painfull memorys
Memory is a part of the past
The past is to be left in the past


The wheel spins faster still and to be different a challenge..
It is hard to go the other way when the corpses of thouse who followed trip you up.

Lost in myself

Lost within my own soul
I feel my heart beating
Alive but not for long
I feel my life fadeing

I turn to find the light
As I feel the darkness creaping
The darkness consumes my body
As I stop breathing

Not bad

[color=DarkSlateGray] Time [/color]

Time goes on never stoping
Always turning, Fires burning
Higher still till all thats left
Is Ash and Embers

Can you remember once apon a time?
You were young Yes you were free
But thats over now.

We are all just a part of the play
Just puppets on the masters strings
You play your part ant then you die

Yet time goes on never stoping always turning

[color=DarkOrange] The Wolf[/color]
Look into the eyes of the beast
See your true form
Yellow eyes, Glistening fangs
Howl of your power to the moon.
Smell the air, It is full of the scent..
Prey!
Run......run and chase and play.
Feel the earth under your paws tremble
The forest knows its master
~~For you are the Wolf~~

Good poem. keep it up

[color=MediumTurquoise] Winter night[/color]

Let the roaring sea of my mind be calmed with thoughts of cold winter nights
Frost over everything,unmeltable bliss
The bitter frost and ice glistening
The trees frozen bare ares reach to the gray sky
The ground is white with snow like the tears of angels....

It is a baren world of wight on this lovely winters night.

Gray sky

Lift you eyes to the gray sky
taste the blood on your face

Your tears fall frozen to the floor
Shiver slightly at your disgrace

Face your fate see what you hate
don't turn away you'll let it win

Face your fears fight back tears
Don't turn away you might win

lift your eyes to the gray sky
smile at the moon

your tears are gone now so show no fear.

Truly nobody

Are you truly nobody...
Can you fall into shadows and feel no fear

Can you realy be nobody...
Will you walk into the gray mist and feel no shame

Will you ever be nobody
Or are you to afaid to let go of the light to explore the darkness before you....

Beautiful sky why do you weep
Have you lost someone dear?

Beautiful sky your heart I will keep
I will hold you near.

[color=DeepSkyBlue]The Rain's Dance[/color]
The rain keeps fallen'
The rain keeps callen' my name

It forms pools of serene aqua
It forms pools of crystalline blue

Hypnotized by the flood
Hypnotized by the feeling in my blood

The rain falls in the rythm of my heart beat
It stirrs my feet to move to dance

And so I dance with the rain
And so it washes away the pain

[color=DarkRed]Misery[/color]

Where are you misery?
Did the finaly kill you?
Are you gone for good?

No, here you are misery.
Creaping about my hollow bones
hiding in the shadows of my heart

Will you stay misery?
Don't you know I miss you when you're gone?
Please stay with me misery.
Because with no one else I'm alone.

very good

Bitter sweet music runs it's course
drunken on music
I sit with my heart wide open soaking in every note
I want to sit in this moment forever
just getting drunk off bitter sweet music.

I'm sorry
No matter how many times it is said
Those two words
I'm sorry.
They should cut out the liers tongues
I'm sorry
No two words have endured more lies than,
I'm sorry
Sould be released from his ties....

The rain falls softly
Rain drops hit the windowpane
so you sleep soundly.

Listen to me now
I only want to tell you
How lovely you are.

these are good start for poems, on some you need a little more detail, do you keep up with your lines? It aways good to keep a record, you never know when a little seed written years ago will give birth to a great work. The last poem is a very good start, but it needs to be continued. keep up the work.
I notice a lot of sad themes in your poetry, I used poetry a lot to work out my feelings. It can help, but in your sad poem a little hope helps.

Oh yes, They are all in a notebook I keep. ^-^

good, I can tell you, I now have note books all over the place

From the Raven to his Angel

Every time I see you, every day
And across my ears your lovely voice doth play
I smile and laugh to myself
And think how blessed I am to have such wealth
How undeserving I am, a wretched cad
But still you smile and laugh it makes me glad
That the heavens took pity and sent an angel
With gossamer strings for my heart to entangle
And hold it fast in hands so tender
My very life for you I'd render
And still I'd never amount to as much
As this purest of beings with the gentle touch
So please love, keep my heart in tow
For I fear I will never let you go

The Foolish Lovers

Two youth sought together love’s simple truth
Finding ample pleasure just in the other’s arms
Fools were they not to see through the world’s wicked charms

Their love was strong but young
Still the boy listened to the war’s wicked tongue
Away he went to fight full of valor
Never thinking once of his love, only power

When the blood shed was over and all lay dead
She sought him out, her heart filled with dread

The cold moon looked down with distain
On the boy, a wound to the heart his life blood did drain

She never found him in that gloom
As he bled slowly she wept at his tomb

No one to comfort her, no kind words in him to console
The wound and grief each took their toll

He was a fool not to call out to her as she knelt there crying
She was a fool not to look for him as he lay there dieing

His wound seething, his heart was bleeding
As he slowly died
Her heart breaking, she lay there aching
A poison she drank and sighed

As the last of his life blood did seep into the ground along with the tears she did weep
They both lay dead
The story of two greater fools has never been read.

Broken Wings

My wings broke
Smashed among cobblestones
I cry, silence
Bleeding I lay
So much pain
Not for myself
But for those who have scorned me

A storm Of butterflys

The wind will show no pity
Fragile forms ripped apart with each scream
The storm’s anger will not sedate
The product of the rage….
A rain fall of butterfly wings

I am the butterfly….
As I struggle…
The earth, my mother, tears my body apart
The life she gave, she now takes.
I rain upon the soil and she shows no compassion

I am the wind….
Voice of the earth….
I scream, I cry, I shriek
All who are in my way shall fall prey to my hunger.
I do not weep it is only nature.

Because I'm leaving

Gather up the crumbs of your soul
The one I devoured so many moons ago

The fireflies dance almost mocking
They create a soft glow of chartreuse

I want to hold your hands but I won’t let me
I refuse to be your cane any longer

You mustn’t cry love, mustn’t cry
What I’m doing is for your own good

So stand up tall and proud
As they say a proper man should.

Anyone who wants to read more can find them here. http://lady-afrit.deviantart.com/gallery/#poetry

Just the Four of Us

Sit in the corner of my being
Sit with me, myself, and I
Waves of euphoria abound
Among the wavering poppies
Beyond the fields of cornflower
We’ll sit just the four of us

Sit in the corner of my soul
Sit with me myself, and I
Watercolors will dance in our eyes
Among the wavering poppies
Beyond the amethyst seas
We’ll sleep just the four of us

Sit in the corner of my aura
Sit with me, my pain, and innocence
White ponies will ghost about our heads
Among the wavering poppies
Beyond the emerald graves
We’ll die just the four of us.