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because I like to share....

PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2006 8:23 pm
by Kry
Here's a recent poem I wrote, what do you think?
SPINNING


The world keeps spinning,
As life passes me by.
Another day gone,
Time continues to fly.

The world keeps spinning,
As someone dies.
Tears of lost love,
Yet, the Sun continues to rise.

The world keeps spinning,
A new life is born.
A mother's smile brightens the day,
Yet, someone, somewhere, is forlorn.

The world keeps spinning,
Until I become dizzy beyond restoration.
Time goes by so quickly,
Is it possible to find a place of deceleration?

The world keeps spinning,
As life continues on.
Live each moment to it's fullest,
Before your time is gone...

PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2006 8:31 pm
by Mr. SmartyPants
Hmmm. I really like your poem. Good job on it!

PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:24 am
by creed4
That is real good, keep it up

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 8:09 am
by GrubbTheFragger
wow good job Kry

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 2:27 am
by Sakura15
That's awesome Shai-chan! I love it! can I quote it? lol