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Just thought I'd share...

PostPosted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 3:27 pm
by Kry
This is a poem I wrote.....


If Only

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I lose my breath,
My heart skips a beat.
The thought of you,
Sweeps me off my feet.

It's all a fairy tale,
Within my imagination.
In reality, I'm so afraid,
I'll lose our friendship; devastation.

I lose my breath,
My heart skips a beat.
I'm scared...
Every time our eyes meet.

I want to be with you,
I want to see your smile every day,
I want to be the reason for that sparkle in your eye.
I want to be able to love you, and know it's ok.

I lose my breath,
My heart skips a beat.
You and me, together...
If only life could be so sweet.


Copyright©2006


Comments are more than welcome. ^_^

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:15 am
by creed4
Sweet, nice Love poem

PostPosted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 6:19 pm
by Anna Mae
I want to be able to love you, and know its ok.
'Its' should have an apostrophe here.

creed4 wrote:Sweet, nice Love poem
Agreed.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:40 pm
by Kry
Anna Mae wrote:I want to be able to love you, and know its ok.
'Its' should have an apostrophe here.

Agreed.

odd, you know I checked that poem in microsoft word and I originally wrote it with an apostrophy, but microsoft word underlined it in green and took away the apostrophy when I spell-checked it. I guess word was confuzed because I know your right. I shall change it, thanks for commenting! ^_^

PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 11:20 am
by Anna Mae
Sure thing. Often Word can't process complicated sentences correctly and thus gives incorrect advice.