Poem with a positive ending: Stay (plz comment?)
PostPosted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 7:48 am
Here we have another example of my poetry. This one has a positive ending though, for those who didn't like my last one because the peom itself wasn't so positive. So yay for positive endings! I wrote this one only last week, so what do you think?
Please comment! thanx-u! ^_^
STAY
Its the end of your world,
Its all falling apart.
Crashing in on your perfect life,
And ripping out your heart.
What will you do now?
Only one last moment to decide.
What will you do with this tattered life?
Breathe, you have not yet died.
Don't be afraid...
Embrace a new beggining.
Leave behind your old life,
Live and learn from your past ending.
Your heart still beating within your cheast,
Time to re-create.
Re-insprire.
Choose your new life, new fate.
Inspire a happy ending,
Let God lead the way.
Your world can be of great wonder,
Just don't give up, stay.
Never give up....stay.
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Its the end of your world,
Its all falling apart.
Crashing in on your perfect life,
And ripping out your heart.
What will you do now?
Only one last moment to decide.
What will you do with this tattered life?
Breathe, you have not yet died.
Don't be afraid...
Embrace a new beggining.
Leave behind your old life,
Live and learn from your past ending.
Your heart still beating within your cheast,
Time to re-create.
Re-insprire.
Choose your new life, new fate.
Inspire a happy ending,
Let God lead the way.
Your world can be of great wonder,
Just don't give up, stay.
Never give up....stay.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Please comment! thanx-u! ^_^
