CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

My newest poem, please review!

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Her veil is the mist covered mountains
her dress the sparkling sea
the bouquet she holds, the meadow
and in this girl is me

The Groom stands in his armor
as brilliant as the sun
for He is the King of glory
the bride is His chosen one

Oh the galaxy is the chapel
the clouds as carriages draw nigh
Angels sing the chorus
and with joy the bride will cry

The King wipes away every tear
a kind smile on His face
“These vows will last forever,
forever you shall have my graceâ€

Aw, that's beautiful! I really like it, and very good use of words and metaphor. ^^ Very good job.

Beautiful. I love the imagery. Very good.

It's great, I can't but think about Christ and the Church