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I miss you (poem)

PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 1:06 pm
by zelda
here's a poem i made. And yes, it's true.



I never talked to you

you never talked to me

I smiled and said hi

you just smiled back

I went to your house

I really didn't care to see you

I knew you were going to die

I never thought it would come

I held your hand

you smiled at me one last time

I cried

you died

when I last saw you I just said bye

I wish that I said I love you

I miss you so much

why did you have to leave?

please say I'll see you in Heaven


I love you Uncle Bud......

PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 10:55 pm
by christianfriend
Thats very good...and very sad..*starts crying* ToT

PostPosted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 10:05 pm
by Felix
Aw.. sad.. T_T Now I wish I had known your Uncle Bud <.< Nice poem, very nice

PostPosted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 11:25 pm
by CookinLikeSanji
Simpy beautiful. A heartfelt and emotional piece of work, I'm sorry to hear of your loss Zelly.

PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 1:09 pm
by Anna Mae
Well done. It is a good reminder to all of us to more carefully consider how we relate to people.

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 1:32 pm
by creed4
Yes very sad, I'm sorry for your loss. Good poem