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PostPosted: **Tue Dec 13, 2005 5:49 pm**

I will put poetry in here I would like your guy's honest opinons it will help me improve

This poem is about Arwen's choice between the ships that would take her to the place of her people the elves and her beloved Aragorn

Arwen's Lament

there is no ship to bear me hither,
to pale lands, the lands of my people,
I have chosen Mortal Life,
I am daughter of immortals,
chosen by mortal man,
I have not sought the ships of the haven,
a gray haven, my haven I have not sought,
because there is no ship to carry me,
I am tied to mortal king with sword reforged,
I am tied to mortal lands,
there is no ship to bear me hither,
I am elf, daughter of gray havens,
and there is no ship to bear me hither

PostPosted: **Wed Dec 14, 2005 8:09 pm**

I was very good I loved it! ^ ~

PostPosted: **Wed Dec 14, 2005 9:08 pm**

I love it Jade-chan!!! its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep up the exculent work!

PostPosted: **Thu Dec 15, 2005 10:44 am**

It was good, keep it up

PostPosted: **Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:09 pm**

Excellent! Even though it did seem to repeat a little, the idea is Wonderful! I'm still at a loss for writing poems 'n what-not. *cries* I need a muse on my shoulder...

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Jadefox's poetry

Jadefox's poetry