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Poems...

PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:00 pm
by purplemoose
ok this first one i wrote a while back and is a little morbid but the other two..well im just tired so read and enjoy

Maniac
by Chuck Yates

Painful Cries
Shiny Blood
Smeared across a velvet rug
For when he strikes they will pay
No matter the time of day
He stabs them once
He stabs them twice
he makes them scream and squeal like mice


Untitled 1
by Chuck Yates

In this Lake of Fire
Of those who lived for their desires
Is where they fall
When They've lost it all
Bloodcurdling screams
Reach the dreams
Of those who've come to pay
Their sins at the Final Judgement Day
You'll see where you stumbled and fell
When you come to this place the wicked favour called Hell
And you'll feel unbearable shame
When your Loving Father denies your name
For where you didn't see
He could've set you free


Untitled 2
by Chuck Yates

Dry wilted leaves crunch beneath my feet
Wilted and lifeless as society
I pray for them to turn to Christ
For all they are is a Atheist
Putting us on their nuisance list
Please pardon my religion of love


please don't be afraid to be negative just dont't be a jerk about it ^.^ actually be a jerk i dont mind it .... :dance:

PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:06 pm
by creed4
The second one cought my attentions IT is the a sad reality. Keep working

PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:09 pm
by purplemoose
yay no one ever gives me feedback thanx!

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 7:46 am
by purplemoose
Untitled 3
by Chuck Yates

Your are cold & hard
Like a lump of lard
All greasy and cold
Making you more slimey than mold
Let me be bold
And tell all young and old
Of how He died for you and me

PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 5:44 pm
by creed4
Seems like two poem, with the abrupt change