CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

i got a new fic. its a Gundam fic called Omega Gundam. i have a summary and bios. first ill put up a summary which isnt that good. then ill put the bios up one by one. then ill post the chapters.

summary:

5 teenagers are sent to the Earth from the Colonies.In the year AC 295, peace has followed the Earth Sphere Unified Nation for 98 years. Now, a new threat arises. Ishoro Kimara and the Kimara Coirporation have risen against the E.S.U.N. With its new mobile suit models, they plan to launch an attack to overthrow the Earth Sphere. Only one thing stands in their way. Actually, its five things. The Gundams and their Pilots. The Gundams will fight till theres nothing left of them. And the pilots would kill themselves rather than lose a battle. Only they can stop the Kimara Corporation and save the Earth Sphere...

i did that in like 15 minutes so if it sux, then dont blame the time. lol. i got 4 chapters right now and plan to put them on every msg board i go to.

WHAT I MADE A GUNDUM STORY CALLED OMEGA GUNDAM CRAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP I made it 2 years ago its all in my head o well

ill start posting since some have the disrespect not to post on the topic (sorry had to say that)

anyway:

Sazamaki Yorishomo

Always bragging and boasting. He's a little too thingyy going into battle. Most of the time, he can back up the bragging. But sometimes it's JUST bragging.
He has skill in piloting the 001 Hazard Gundam. The Gatling Gun he uses, is used with skill and aggression. Most pilots cant handle it. When he runs out of ammo, he uses a Beam Ax/Spear. He is also skilled in using this weapon.
Sazamaki is always flirting with Coriama Sikara (for those who dont know, its pronounced Cory-ama See-kaira) But usually, Yazuma Yamaki and Yochimo Morokina (corny name) will drag him away from her. Every once in awhile, Coriama will punch and/or slap him.
He is about 5'7 feet tall, and has brown hair and grey eyes. He wears T-shirts with Dragons on them and shorts that match the color of them.

id hate to be him, besides the coo fighting skills. lol

Nice concept, but please do not use [axe/spear] the proper term is a (pole axe). For one it would sound corny when your describing a battle sequence with it. Sorry had to put my two cents in.

Note: A lochaber axe is in the family (Pole Cleaver).

well what you expect me to put. its a double ax with a spear head between them. i have one drawn.

yes but there usually a specific name for any type of weapon. Maybe you might find something like what you have in Oriental or maybe European weapons, but just research for it. When you write, be specific, never generalize. You're describing your world to others and if you don't show them your world through your language then people believe that you don't care about it. Just research for the name of your weapon, thats all I saying.

Yeah. Hey where is the fan-fic anyway?